Technical Hitch by Jane SigaloffMy rating: 1 of 5 stars
This book was not very well written, but even worse, it was very poorly edited. It was so bad, that I had to check if the book was an ARC or not. (Sadly, it isn't). The conversations were awkward at times, the story lines didn't do much for me, and the errors really took me out of the story. A few examples of errors that made me want to burn this book include:
Page 61: "Absently he absently licked the sweat...."
Page 155: "Maybe he thinks he makes it look him less accessible and therefore more desirable".
Page 178: Emma's name is replaced with Jess's on the same page, even though we're clearly only following Emma at this point in the story.
There were a few other errors, but these were the ones that made me want to throw the book against the wall. If I could give this book an even lower rating, I would. It's books like this that make me question my need to finish nearly every book I start.
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